简单好写的AEIS高分句型：平行结构

　　在AEIS作文中，有很多可以使用平行结构的地方。尤其是进行过程描述或者同时提出多个细节时，试着把多个动作用同样的形式表达出来，一定会给考官留下思路清晰、语言简洁的好印象。同学们不妨一试。

　　比如我们常用的both ... and、either ... or、neither ... nor和not only ... but also也可以用来连接平行结构，使用时要特别注意前后的结构是否完全平行。

　　接下来让我们一起用几个句子改错来练习平行结构：

　　许多年从业人员面临两难问题；工作时为了金钱还是乐趣？

　　原句：A dilemma facing many young professionals is whether to work for money or work for enjoyment.

　　平行版：A dilemma facing many young professionals is whether to work for money or to work for enjoyment.

　　这对于胜利者和那些输掉的人来说都是一个问题。

　　原句：This could be a problem for both the winners and those who lose.

　　平行版：This could be a problem for both the winners and the losers.

　　奥林匹克志愿者们做好准备、完全有能力、下定决心圆满完成任务。

　　原句：Olympic volunteers were ready, filly able, and were quite determined to do a great job.

　　平行版：Olympic volunteers were ready, able, and determined to do a great job.

　　学生可以登陆Facebook，花时间阅读邮件，浏览一些博客推送，然后开心地发微博。

　　原句：Students can log onto Facebook, spend time reading email messages, review some blog posts, and then tweet with joy.

　　平行版：Students can check Facebook, read email messages, review blog posts, and then joyfully send tweets.　　

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